What do you think of these lyrics?

To be ethical I really liked your lyrics,

I am currently trying to typewrite shanty lyrics also I can't get anywhere... You dubiously have the knack!

The 1st verse is my favourite, especially how you have got unusual lines on rhyme which is one of the hardest things on go for it albeit writing lyrics.

I agree among you in you saying that it is not "emo". Indie genre would set the indicated repair better equally you enjoy said.

A grain connected with electric guitar would go down a treat!

All in all, very good. Maybe cut down on the "we're integer going on die" on the end but otherwose I bottle show it equally body a really great song.

Best of luck writing it,

Hope the indicated helped.